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floppy lips

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Unpredictable
« on: October 04, 2013, 02:20:43 PM »
Recording with Deva and Arum , floppy
Like to know what you think of it , thanks

https://app.box.com/s/a5i1aiv2xnngdprdskou

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Re: Unpredictable
« Reply #1 on: October 04, 2013, 04:55:18 PM »
Nice one.

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Re: Unpredictable
« Reply #2 on: October 04, 2013, 05:21:03 PM »
It rocks!

Vocals:  Great!
Harmonica:  Sucks.    Ha ha, just kidding.   The harmonica is great!  Great!

Criticizisms:
When she sings the chorus "I'm a little unpredictable"  I think she repeats it one time to many, and I hear that phrase ending differently.

On my speakers the mix is sometimes off.  Sometimes the harmonica is too loud compared to the vocals.   But the harp tone I love.  The riffs I love.

It really is top notch scotch!

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Re: Unpredictable
« Reply #3 on: October 04, 2013, 05:28:09 PM »
Hi Sander,
I am sitting here doing other things, and "Unpredictable" is still playing in my head.   I hear her throaty "I'm just a little unpredictable".    That's a mark of a great song.    It left an emotional imprint in my head.

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Re: Unpredictable
« Reply #4 on: October 04, 2013, 06:21:38 PM »
Thanks Rick , ill pass the word, yeah she is a artist pur sang never had lessons , man she sings loud haha thanks for your words ,
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Re: Unpredictable
« Reply #5 on: October 04, 2013, 09:27:49 PM »
Hey Flop,

I liked it, I think a low low harp would be great here to give her some sonic space and add some gravis to the tune.  But the harp is good as is.  I especially liked a lot of the little touches toward the end.

BZB